Kia Ora, I'm Grace a year 7 student from YMS which stands for Yaldhurst Model school. I really like your blog post because it shows what you are saying really cleary.
I also like a lot of food that you have put on here, I also like that you have added some information about it.
To improve maybe add more information like why did you deice to post it, and maybe add it into a slide.
Kia ora Zaheer, my name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. I have to agree with you, nachos are delicious. But I think that my favourite food would have to be, spicy Chicken Chow Mein. Have you ever heard of, or tried that dish before? Well if you haven't, you should totally check it out.
Anyways, I love that you numbered the list and you have explained what it is. Although maybe you could have been a titch more creative. Maybe by adding: Photo's, video's or drawings of your's favorite foods. Maybe e even presented this differently, like using Piktochart or Canva. That will really catch the eye of the viewer?
THe foods you like are similar to my brother's, but are there and fruit's or snacks that you enjoy. My top three favourite fruits are: Watermelons, Guava's and mango's. All fruits from my home country Fiji.
Hi Zaheer. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like you blog post. And how you have said some or the foods you like even though they are not healthy. I really like most of that food as well. Especially chocolate. Which I see didn't have a number. So there was 11 foods. Next Time I think you might want to check for stuff like that. And maybe add a photo or 2 of some of the food. But apart from that it is a good blog post.
Hi there Zaheer, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. Some of that food sounds amazing.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you set the foods out in a nice and orderly list so it is easy to read.
This reminds me of when I bake desserts or something unhealthy. Do you cook some of these foods?
Next time you could add more to it like color or a poster with the words on it. Just to make it more exciting.
How often do you have these foods?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Hi Abby Thanks for your comment
DeleteNo I dont have these foods often and thanks for your ideas.
Thanks
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a year 7 student from YMS which stands for Yaldhurst Model school.
I really like your blog post because it shows what you are saying really cleary.
I also like a lot of food that you have put on here,
I also like that you have added some information about it.
To improve maybe add more information like why did you deice to post it, and maybe add it into a slide.
Apart from that its great
Kind regards -
Grace
Kia ora Zaheer,
ReplyDeletemy name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. I have to agree with you, nachos are delicious. But I think that my favourite food would have to be, spicy Chicken Chow Mein. Have you ever heard of, or tried that dish before? Well if you haven't, you should totally check it out.
Anyways, I love that you numbered the list and you have explained what it is. Although maybe you could have been a titch more creative. Maybe by adding: Photo's, video's or drawings of your's favorite foods. Maybe e even presented this differently, like using Piktochart or Canva.
That will really catch the eye of the viewer?
THe foods you like are similar to my brother's, but are there and fruit's or snacks that you enjoy. My top three favourite fruits are: Watermelons, Guava's and mango's. All fruits from my home country Fiji.
I can't wait to hear back!
-Jedi 🍉 🥭
Hi Zaheer. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like you blog post. And how you have said some or the foods you like even though they are not healthy. I really like most of that food as well. Especially chocolate. Which I see didn't have a number. So there was 11 foods. Next Time I think you might want to check for stuff like that. And maybe add a photo or 2 of some of the food. But apart from that it is a good blog post.
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